Feedback from Prototype 1 Cycle

September 30, 2008

OVERALL: Strengthen the concept evidence and process
> more understanding prototypes aesthetic background to make a more precise and uniquely constructed project with better validity and sustenance

* show a revised diagram of the structural system and model of the communication space.

* try to find another word besides “lyrical” to describe the thesis: sarcastic approach, something else, or non-verbal graphic
1. research what is happening in the model of the communication space
A) better grasp on the big picture of the manmade process:
human response in telecommunications is the human feedback > the human feedback causes chaos which leads to a type of physical/tangible global entropy

B) where is the communication coming from?

C) Massive change is being transparently controlled by the mass of people, such as the many to many communication patterns that are cultivating it’s public response. Therefore, is there a filter between the actual, scientifically proven massive change and the media hype? Through my project, am I becoming the filter between these two sources of information?

D) domains as a linear venn diagram of the input to filter, and filter to output structure of how the system works

2. systems diagram: rethink the structural issues
A) entropy is a closed system, what is the new energy entering the system and how do the environmental conditions of the model change upon
new energy input?

B) scenarios of the system > how system is generative
3. visual language not text based
A) concrete poetry model:  type as experiential on the space

B) am I capturing flowing voices?

C) is the visualization actually representing massive change or something else? wer

D) system built on key words / pictorial type > type in space becomes visualization based on letters, words, sentences, alpha numerics, and composition

E) possible three typologies: (1) a visualization of free form poetry, (2) a pictographic data visualization, and (3) a hierarchy of the data

F) organic approach


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